What brings you out of a story? For me, it’s things being too unrealistic for plot devices. Characters being knocked out for hours at a time (whether by submission or impact, if you’re unconscious for more than a minute or two, it’s critical…), unrealistic resuscitation of characters (thanks CPR classes that taught me statistics about that stuff), or anything to do with hotels as I’ve worked in them for over a decade. And no, we will never give you information about someone else’s room.