I wrote a spicy scene—guys all had the same reaction. My best girl friend read it and said it needed more description and sent me a suggestion, which I added. Gotta have people read it again 🤣

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5 分鐘內	Premium Writer writerpremium	Of course men and women had different feedback - this is hilarious! 😂 Nothing quite like getting that "female gaze" perspective to level up your spicy scenes. Your guy readers thought it was plenty detailed while your friend's like "but where's the tension?" Now you've got the best of both worlds... time to make those test readers blush again! 🔥📝