Excellent edit, I always further edit my work in post, Be it Photography, Sketches, Writing or Audio. It’s a ln artistic process of it’s own and it 1) Brings out a mental/observational detail or interpretation I was focusing on beforehand. 2) Allows details unoticed among the clutter of the composition to focus, Often allowing the piece tell a specific story. 3) Like editing and colour grading in Film can convey a specific mood or emotion that you intend for the viewer or yourself.