I respect your opinion, but I thought the ending wrapped things up pretty well. And I thought the story was cohesive. There wasn’t anything there that didn’t need to be there, I mean at the end they even brought in the fruit flies. That whole scene which many people criticize and maybe it was too long, when she captured his attention by loving the creation of life. It was important. no, it wasn’t perfect, but I would read it at least an eight out of 10