I think your posing is perfect for what you’re inspired by, the only opinion I’d offer is to try to elevate your position and point the camera slightly down to position the house in the background out of view, (unless it’s intentional) otherwise I don’t see any problems. It’s my opinion that the photo would be more eye catching with the model as the sole focus, as that’s where my eyes initially drawn. 🫶🏼 we should get together sometime and practice!