Hey there, I can definitely tell your product is for pregnant women (primarily) The real question is : Which pregnant women? What was her job? Did she have one? What is her marital status (married, has a partner, no partner)? Is it the 1st, 2nd or nth child? Does she have health issues? Is she crazy about tracking any little thing? Why would they need this product? What's the purpose of the product? What does it help them solve? Is it even something they'd need? Or are you making it up?

Hey there, designer here. What I’m finding with my own products is people love neat, modern fonts & colours. At first glance I can see that each page is different fonts & colours & overall doesn’t match. As a buyer I would only want spend the money to print a really cohesive design. It would only take 30 mins to change all your fonts to a thinner modern font, change all the pinks to be lighter and more ink friendly. And made the black lines a lighter brown or beige. Little changes help. 🧡